InvaderAtomis's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Into the Gold]

You should totally animate this going left to right, it would be so trippy.

BenTibbetts responds:

:) Here is an animation of the object moving from top-right-corner to bottom-left-corner:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kG7Q--GwI-c

It is not exactly what you asked for, but it is close. This animation was made using the original project file. For that reason, it looks a little different than the still image on this page.

[Elsa Painting]

Pretty good painting, however since she is clearly naked below where we can see you may want to consider changing the rating to teen since there is a slight sexual theme, E ratings are used when it is appropriate content for every age.

Mushromeo responds:

Well I made it for everyone because there's actually no visual nudity and it's a tasteful painting that was actually done without any sexual themes. What was on my mind at the time was she's getting ready to jump in the hot spring. Very ironic. Haha.

[Shipwreck]

I like this version better, the one on dev-art is too dark without having the feeling of darkness that should come from a stormy ship wreck. This picture has an almost bleak emotional feel to it that better describes a deserted feeling. You are very talented, but one thing I think you could improve on is the "brush strokes" I don't know how you are creating the works but whatever qualifies as "brush strokes". They are very vivid, especially on parts where you transition colors, like on the crates and the front of the boat. You did a wonderful job on the ground, in detail and color shifting,

SkyrisDesign responds:

Thanks! Yea i am still trying to find a better brush to paint with :P All the tools im using feels soo.. meh atm xD

[The Ritual]

That is creepy as hell.

Wenart responds:

thanks :D

[Kana]

She is freaking adorable, but she does look like a kid even without the lack of boobs.

Shishizurui responds:

thx!, tho i need to update her appearence.

[Moon Princess]

This picture is really good except for two issues, the mouth, and hand. The mouth, it looks like she has buck teeth, you should have made the smile either showing more teeth or just the lips, I think just lips would be better. Now for the hand, its too darkly shaded, and too large, it looks like the hand of a man who does construction, I understand that the angle of light might create a shaded look, but its too much. Just my thoughts, otherwise a very good pic.

sweetjeannie responds:

Thanks for the input. I can see what you mean by the teeth. As far as the hand I understand how you feel. It is probably a little too dark and maybe a little too detailed in the palm which doesn't give us the impression of a young female's hand. As for the size, its in perspective and even in the reference that I used the hand was bigger....

[Venus]

Not bad over all, and the proportions are that off except on the head, um horns? i guess is what those are. Also the belly button is weird. Are you trying to say anything with this, if so and i am right about the message, then; you use the base of the venus de milo to represent true art, the head to represent modern changes to true art while the strings and broken horn show how society demand art to conform to social trends and ignores true talent for mediocore hack work by keeping it locked away. Is there any truth to that or am i just taking one too many happy pills?

TheN0mad responds:

i generally paint without much purpose, il try to envision a thought or an idea and then visualize those things...but really in the end what i want something to represent means very little, if that's what you want it to mean then i have no right to tell you your wrong, that's how art works my friend :P

sorry if that's not what you wanted to hear

[Happy Holidays!]

I love everything about this picture except the teeth, they seem to big, and the nose is a mite small but maybe thats just the teeth. I especially loves the eyes, very good work

doublemaximus responds:

Thanks man! Big teeth is just how my style works, yo!

[Like this]

Is the nun wear and skull referring to the "dead innocence" of the people who blindly let themselves overlook so many wrongs in the world by shutting out themselves via technological walls. Technology is supposed to improve communication and promote awareness and even though we see all the tragidies and wrongs we ignore them for the most part because we rapidly move to the next thing. I dont really get the Ipad, I mean i do to a point but there are so many other companies to use, like google, that I wonder if there is a special reason you used Ipad?

TONIKOR responds:

I knew the ipad thing would come up. It's not a poke at apple or anything. Apple is just such an current brand and people regonize the product. The pad in itself doesn't really have any meaning, it's just there to deliver the point.